i love reading long one-shots...and yours definitely did not disappoint!
the constant push and pull between kame and jin is hard to miss here...
and kame is such a bully towards jin...
and jin is repressed.
its 4 am...and once i started reading..i just couldnt stop...but i feel so incoherent right now...after reading and it being late...sorry that i cant leave a better comment...cuz you deserve it!

your writing style, storyline, and description of kame and jin...loved it all =)