http://natsukashi-yume.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] natsukashi-yume.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] defeminized 2011-09-20 08:25 am (UTC)

Wow Joo, this was beautiful and tender and hot. I can never read threesomes that are just smutty, but this had such a lovely back story. I loved how they took care of Kame but he wasn't portrayed as weak or needy... they were all just there for each other, because they cared. Loved the meta of the storytelling and how they both couldn't write without Kame in their stories.. T____T

And the snuggling... asjlkafjakhasla

This was lovely... write MOAR ♥_♥

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