I love this so much and you suck becuz you didn't tell me you posted already. :< #betrayed

by the way Kame treats himself like his body’s a puppet of his mind, methodically pulling the strings and calculating the patterns of his moves.
this and the following paragraph. your imagery is beautiful.

but he wonders if he could write anything if Kame was out of their stories
ngl, this is me in regards to fanfic. there has to be Kame lol

He tells him stories about the two boys who love a blind boy and how they tell the blind boy that they will be his eyes because he can’t see.
again with the imagery. your incorporation of the extended puppeteer metaphor was so smooth, Joo. ♥

Ack! I read the sentence wrong and gave you the wrong advice >.< The sentence would work better as: a puppeteet who cuts the strings of his two marionettes because he couldn’t bear to confine them within his control anymore.
Sorry about that. I thought the marionettes were doing the cutting orz

Joo, I'm so proud of you. Truly. This was such a creative idea and you worked it so well and just fhdskjfhd. Loved it. ♥